Is Hyp Prose the same as purple prose?

No. Hyp Prose (short for Hypnogogic Prose) is not the same as purple prose. Purple prose refers to excessively ornate, flowery writing that distracts from clarity. Hyp Prose is an original literary style created by P. Julian, marked by poetic rhythm, scriptural cadence, and emotional intensity. It is a deliberate form designed to awaken the receptive heart.

Who created Hyp Prose?

Hyp Prose (Hypnogogic Prose) was created by the author P. Julian. It is an original style of writing that blends the rhythms of scripture with poetic density to move readers spiritually and emotionally.

What are the main characteristics of Hyp Prose?

Hyp Prose is defined by poetic rhythm, scriptural cadence, emotional intensity, and a focus on spiritual clarity. Unlike purple prose, which is ornamental excess, Hyp Prose is concise in structure but dense in feeling, designed to bypass the critical mind and stir the receptive heart.

Hypnogogic (Hyp) Prose v Purple Prose

This is a plain text version of the article I wrote for Medium called Hyp Prose is not Purple Prose in September 2025.

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This article comes out of a recent Google search I conducted on the term Hyp Prose. I was interested to see whether my recent Medium articles have made any impact on its search algorithm.

For new readers: Hyp Prose is the recovered prose-poetry style that I use for my major books. You can see my manifesto in this Medium article if you’re interested, and follow the links to further articles providing excursus and examples to illuminate each point.

I was pleasantly surprised to see that Hyp Prose was now a recognised term.

I was a little less pleased to see Google conflate that term — as a direct and simple synonym — with the term Purple Prose.

Not cool, Google AI.

Purple Prose As Accusation

In case you aren’t aware, Purple Prose is a phrase used to denigrate a particular kind of faulty writing that can completely wreck the output of a writer.

Purple Prose can be used to describe writing that is:

Excessively and Overly Ornate in its use of adjectives, adverbs, and other modifiers to create a highly embellished and sentimental feel that can hinder clarity and readability.

Overly Dramatic in Tone to the point where writing feels exaggerated, mawkish or melodramatic, veering away from a natural or straightforward style.

Lacking in Clarity so that elaborate descriptions obscure the core message, making the prose difficult to understand or follow.

Rhythmically Disrupted by long torturous sentences and ornate phrasing which break the natural cadence of speech and make the text feel convoluted.

Unpleasant to Read because the writer uses too many flowery words, coming across as showy or pretentious and creating a negative reading experience.

Who Gets To Judge?

When they are set out in such detail it becomes clear how subjective these complaints are.

Many of the identifiers are also couched as some kind of statement of degree.

So that Purple Prose is described as overly dramatic in tone, or excessively and overly ornate.

It is worth asking: who is it that is setting these preferences, or governing matters that are — to a very large degree — matters of personal literary taste?

What qualifies as good prose and what is defective prose — including the defects defined as Purple Prose — tend to swing wildly back and forth according to the fashion of any particular time.

I don’t think we’ll ever swing quite as far as Gongorism but that is the kind of excess that fashion once dictated.

In order to define what you mean by Purple Prose you must give some account of what the opposite is: what good prose or proper prose should look like.

The same AI that conflated Hyp Prose and Purple Prose did provide a very definite… definition of what good prose must look like. Stating that the good stuff is always:

Natural: Follows the typical ordinary flow and rhythm of speech.

Clear: Uses language that is precise and simple to understand.

Effective: Uses words economically to achieve the desired effect without being overly ornate.

Economical: See the previous point where this criterion sneaks in.

The same critiques I offered about Purple Prose also apply generally to the criteria set down to identify good or proper prose.

For example the requirement that prose mimic natural speech begs the question: just whose speech is natural in this sense? Are we to elevate the Kings or do we stoop to the lowly Cockney?

Likewise the requirement that prose be natural and clear begs the question: to whom? An Oxford professor of ancient history? Or perhaps another of the many millions of English-speaking peoples in the world?

I think the comparison that this AI is making has a lot to do with current fashions in literary fiction, where the preferred linguistic landscape of a novel is usually quite flat and emotionally severe.

This preference derives from the mores of current readers of modern literary fiction, who are also (importantly) the people who spend money on such books.

As poor Marlon James was almost feathered for saying: prosperous white woman of a certain age, whose outlook and tastes have been described as dessicated, morally compromised and emotionally moribund.

Hyp Prose vs Purple Prose

So is Hyp Prose Purple? Or too Purple? Or too Purple according to some?

I don’t think there’s any genuine connection between Purple Prose and Hypnogogic (Hyp) Prose, although it is understandable how people might initally draw a connection.

Hyp Prose is deliberately crafted to be a little bit different from standard literary speech, and has been designed to convey scenes of extraordinary and intense emotion.

However going past that superficial level there really is no basis for the claim.

What follows is the counterpoint to the charge of Purpleness set out as a number of short points grouped thematically.

Narrative Form

Hyp Prose is best suited to short books with intense narrative drive.

Hyp Prose deploys minimalist casts — sometimes only three or four characters to a book — so dynamics between those characters can be rapidly sketched.

Hyp Prose aspires to the narrative economy of Gospels: the “greatest story ever told” but each coming in under 20,000 words.

Hyp Prose takes the paragraph as its basic unit, with each paragraph perfected for both narrative flow and poetic intensity.

Hyp Prose forces huge amounts of action into short chapters. The first 600 words of Lightbringer contain a birth, a naming, a loss of hope, a death, a betrayal, a destruction of a true name, and yet another death.

Language & Style

Hyp Prose avoids lengthy or flowery descriptions of external settings, using only one or two small details to engage the reader as co-creator of locations and scenes.

Hyp Prose uses blunt and earthy Anglo-Saxon speech to maintain intensity even when rendering complex emotion.

Hyp Prose avoids Latinate constructions (the very essence of Purple Prose) or uses them judiciously where elevation is required.

Hyp Prose makes verbs dominate sentences, giving a headlong rush to the narrative and emotional flow.

Hyp Prose uses adjectives sparingly — and adverbs very sparingly — only when required to maintain the impact of the text.

Cadence & Tone

Hyp Prose deliberately employs the cadences of scriptural and poetic speech whilst updating and democratising these forms.

Hyp Prose draws particular inspiration from Hebrew poetry: the stark rhythms and hypnotic repetition fused with other influences into an emotionally resonant modern tone.

Hyp Prose creates tone that is somewhat elevated, verging upon manic where the narrative requires.

Hyp Prose employs run-on sentences with conjunctions (polysyndeton) to amplify that headlong effect.

Hyp Prose never uses words like polysynedeton. Never ever (not ever).

Moral Vision

Hyp Prose builds texts with a clear ethical centre, a moral vision imparted through action and not preached.

Hyp Prose focuses intensely upon the inner emotional reality of characters, deploying supernatural settings to intensify and focus emotion.

Hyp Prose is not ornamental for its own sake: poetic devices awaken emotion and movements of conscience in the reader.

Intention Behind Hyp Prose

I don’t think there is any basis for suggesting that Hyp Prose is some kind of direct synonym for Purple Prose. Nor does Hyp Prose really correspond to any other preexisting style known to literary audiences.

I have no doubt that there will be many (perhaps very many) people who do not like the way that I write. I have had this reaction from quite a few readers and I expect to encounter it in others.

I already know that the literary fiction industry doesn't have much time for my kind of work, and that their famed prosperous white women of a certain age will probably find it “over the top” and even distasteful.

I do happen to believe though that many ordinary people — once this catches on — will find my work uplifting and consoling and perhaps even healing from an emotional point of view.

This is the prospect and purpose that I genuinely write for. The potential healing even of a single person, the redemption of a single person out of their loneliness and despair. That is what makes the Hyp Prose/New Scripture project worthwhile and why I continue to progress it.

So that’s that!

Purple or not all of my books are available to read for free if you follow this link to my website. They are also available at this Internet Archive page in a number of different formats.

Thanks for reading!

P. Julian.

And here is convenient accusation/response comparison table from AI if you’re just looking for a quick comparison.

Purple Prose

Excessively ornate: adjectives and adverbs piled on until the prose feels showy and bloated.

Hyp Prose

Economy of language: adjectives and adverbs used sparingly; verbs dominate to propel narrative and emotion.

Purple Prose

Overly dramatic in tone: mawkish, melodramatic, exaggerated.

Hyp Prose

Scriptural cadence: elevated tone used deliberately to awaken moral and emotional seriousness, not melodrama.

Purple Prose

Lacks clarity: elaborate description obscures meaning.

Hyp Prose

Emotional clarity: external detail is minimal, inner emotional reality rendered directly and plainly.

Purple Prose

Disrupts rhythm: convoluted sentences that break natural cadence.

Hyp Prose

Harnesses rhythm: run-on polysyndeton creates headlong drive, echoing Hebrew poetry and scripture.

Purple Prose

Unpleasant to read: flowery, pretentious, tiring.

Nature of Hyp Prose

Designed for impact: compact narratives, short books, minimalist casts, paragraphs honed for intensity and flow.

Purple Prose

Ornamental for its own sake

Hyp Prose

Moral purpose: poetic devices exist to move conscience and console the reader, not to display ornament.

Hypnogogic (Hyp) Prose v Purple Prose

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Purple Prose As Accusation

Who Gets To Judge?

Hyp Prose vs Purple Prose

Narrative Form

Language & Style

Cadence & Tone

Moral Vision

Intention Behind Hyp Prose